Why Write Tanka?
By Janpha Thadphoothon
I would like to introduce to you another poetic form from Japan – tanka. A tanka is a Japanese poem that is traditionally written in a single line and contains 31 syllables. It is also known as a "short song" or "short poem."
Structure
A tanka is made up of five lines with 5, 7, 5, 7, and 7 syllables in each line. Tankas are usually written without punctuation. As you can notice, the first three lines are identical to haiku. In this sense, it can be thought of as an extension of a haiku.
Here, I would like to offer my Tanka writing theory. let me explain. You start writing with the context of the narrative (5-7-5). Then you offer your comment or critical analysis of the story. Finally, you offer a conclusion line.
To break it down:
- [Context]: 5-7-5
- [Comment]: 7
- [Conclusion]: 7
Here is an example:
"The Real Future"
Sounds of young children
Outdoor in the evening
Playing and chatting
Their voices the real power
The future in the making
I am sure you would agree with me that poetry like this allows us to capture fleeting moments of life in a concise and impactful way. As we know, poetry is not just about words; it is about the emotions, images, and ideas those words evoke. I think the tanka is a perfect medium for expressing complex thoughts and emotions in a simple yet profound manner.
Why Write Tanka?
It is my personal belief that the tanka form provides a unique way to connect with the world around us. People say that the beauty of tanka lies in its simplicity. Experts say that its brevity forces the poet to focus on what truly matters, cutting away any unnecessary embellishments. I am not an expert, but I have read somewhere that writing tanka can also be a form of meditation, helping the poet to focus on the present moment.
I guess it is this meditative quality that makes tanka so appealing. When you write a tanka, you are not just describing a scene or sharing a thought; you are inviting the reader to pause and reflect. My conviction is that in our fast-paced modern world, this act of reflection is more important than ever.
The Tanka’s Versatility
One of the reasons I like the idea of writing tanka is its versatility. A tanka can be about anything: nature, love, loss, joy, or even the mundane aspects of daily life. What we all know and agree upon is that poetry has the power to transform the ordinary into something extraordinary. Nevertheless, it is my belief that tanka does this particularly well because of its compact structure.
Consider this example:
"Evening Breeze"
Gentle evening breeze
Carries the scent of blossoms
Whispering secrets
The world holds its breath for you
Moments of peace, fleeting, rare
I think you can see how a simple observation, such as an evening breeze, can be turned into something poetic and meaningful. They say that poetry is the art of paying attention, and tanka encourages us to do just that.
Tanka as a Tool for Self-Expression
In my opinion, tanka is an excellent tool for self-expression. I must admit that I often turn to tanka when I want to express feelings that are difficult to put into words. The concise structure of tanka forces you to distill your thoughts and emotions into their purest form. It is well known that this process can be both challenging and rewarding.
For example:
"Silent Grief"
Tears fall silently
Underneath the autumn moon
Shadows on my face
Memories too heavy to
Carry into the morning
I somehow think that writing a tanka like this can be a form of therapy. It allows you to confront your emotions and release them in a creative and constructive way.
The Communal Aspect of Tanka
What we all know and agree upon is that poetry can bring people together. I like the idea of sharing tankas with others, whether through writing groups, online platforms, or even casual exchanges with friends. The news has it that poetry communities are thriving in the digital age, and tanka is an ideal form for these platforms because of its brevity.
I know you would agree with me that reading and sharing tanka can create a sense of connection. When you read someone else’s tanka, you are given a glimpse into their world, their thoughts, and their emotions. In this way, tanka can foster empathy and understanding.
How to Get Started
I guess it is not as difficult as it might seem to get started with tanka. Here are a few tips to help you begin:
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Observe your surroundings: Pay attention to the little details of life. Notice the colors, sounds, and smells around you. Inspiration often comes from the simplest observations.
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Focus on a moment: Tanka works best when it captures a specific moment or feeling. Think about what you want to convey and focus on that.
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Experiment with language: Play with words and phrases to find the ones that best express your thoughts. Remember, you only have 31 syllables, so choose wisely.
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Don’t overthink it: Sometimes the best tankas are the ones that come to you spontaneously. Let your thoughts flow naturally and see where they take you.
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Practice regularly: Like any art form, writing tanka takes practice. The more you write, the better you will become.
The Joy of Writing Tanka
In conclusion, I think writing tanka is a deeply rewarding experience. It is my personal belief that this poetic form has the power to enrich our lives in countless ways. Whether you are seeking self-expression, reflection, or connection, tanka offers a unique and beautiful way to engage with the world.
Here is one more example to inspire you:
"Morning Dew"
Drops of morning dew
Glistening on the green leaves
Nature’s quiet gift
Reminding us to cherish
The beauty of fleeting time
I know you would agree with me that poetry like this helps us to appreciate the beauty of the present moment. So why not give tanka a try? Who knows, you might discover a new passion or even a hidden talent.
Happy writing!
Janpha Thadphoothon is an assistant professor of ELT at the International College, Dhurakij Pundit University in Bangkok, Thailand. Janpha Thadphoothon also holds a certificate of Generative AI with Large Language Models issued by DeepLearning.AI.